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Hold up and right in the sky



Author : Levelman

Votes : 5
Rating : 66%
Views : 958
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 22/08/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

This is my first Hold level, so please rate fairly.

Oh, and if your playthrough of the level doesn't look like this, you might have done something wrong:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-DfFoNFAWzM

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08/23/2014 03:04 am
Q12546wer22 : 3/10

bad hold. random warp,no close call,unuse space,short,and very boring,nothing really can say as fun and waste my time.

08/22/2014 11:48 pm
RetzorgIII : 7/10

I agree with felipe de farias, and I also mostly agree with the other 2 reviewers, except for the "no scenery" part, as I only add points for scenery; I don't take off points for lack of it.
7/10 OKAY

08/22/2014 06:56 pm
Iamspiderman999 : 8/10

Pretty good for a first hold right level, but there's some things you should know...

ABOUT LEVELS THEMSELVES
A. Create scenery for your levels
B. Don't have cut off tiles

ABOUT HOLDS
A. You shouldn't be able to play a level without dying easily in a hold level
B. Hold levels always have close calls. So start by planning Mario's path towards the end and include sprites (or killing tiles) that barely miss Mario.
hope this helps! If you need any help or are confused about something I said, comment on my profile.

08/22/2014 06:14 pm
felipe de farias : 7/10

i know it's your first hold level, but for me this is not a hold level, because i can complete normally. and have others flaws like blank scenery and empty, some parts are repetitives like jumping over the koopas, and to finish have color switching floating,it's cliché = 7/10

08/22/2014 06:12 pm
oomphalapompatronium : 8/10

hmm not bad. problems, though.
no scenery.
slight cutffage.
no close calls.
i like hold levels that play around with shells, like this one, plus it's your first hold level, so an 8.