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Author : Tylermation

Votes : 6
Rating : 81%
Views : 693
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 26/07/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

This is basically my first attempt ever at using Pouetpu, hence the title. Enjoy.

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07/26/2014 11:43 am
dtaylor17 : 7/10

An above-average first level. However, it looks like a beta level. There is unused space, there are a bunch of cutoffs on the Y axis, and you can't put moles on indoor levels. What the hell are they supposed to dig through, stone (teehee)? Also, I won't take points off for this because you are likely unaware of this, but you did not use layer 2. Layer two means you can put a tile in the same spot as another tile, which is perfect for scenery and enemy placement. If you want to see what I mean, take a look at some of my recent levels (I tend to use layer two a ton.) Now, on to the positive stuff. The level was not flat at all and had good challenges, which is above par for a first level. Also, I actually had fun playing this level, which is a first for me (usually I don't playing first levels.) Here's a little tip: If you are either lazy or don't have much time, type in x:4000 and y:250. On the level, it will show up as x3680 and y0. With practice, you will be good!

07/26/2014 11:04 am
Gamingkoopa1 : 10/10

great level for a first i dont think this is a 6 or 7 i think more it had great challanges and it was fun there was tiling errors what caused a death glitch it also had unused space see more from other reviews i am taking 2 points off due to the flows but give you them back because of your first level good luck on your pouetpu future this is better than my first level

07/26/2014 03:41 am
RetzorgIII : 7/10

Welcome to Pouetpu-Games! Here's the main stuff that you want to watch out for in your future level-making:
First off, the top of the pieces of land coming from the ceiling are cut off at the top. Generally, level-makers would rate that down as a "cutoff."
Also, the consumers of this site generally appreciate background scenery. If you click the arrow at the "L1 L2" part of the level editor, you can switch to layer 2, which is useful for putting blocks in the background.
Finally, your fellow level-makers don't like unused space. Try to fill up all of your level; they also especially don't like it when you don't use the Y-axis space.
Happy level-making!~ ♡
-Zeeky Slotho Retzorg III, Classic Mario Levels Remaker

07/26/2014 02:43 am
MC UberXYB : 6/10

Welcome to Pouetpu! This is good for a first level, however the climbing fence is pointless as you are holding a key. Wasted space at the end and up top. The music doesn't fit the level well 5/10 but seeing as it is your first 6/10

07/26/2014 02:41 am
Factor M : 10/10

Carrying a key across netting is really hard, otherwise good level.