Level portal
Come share, review and play Super Mario Flash levels !
Back
World 1-1



Author : VGtree054

Votes : 6
Rating : 78%
Views : 683
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 18/09/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

Sup guys, VGtree here, and this is my first level for pouetpu games. Not much to say about this other than the fact that Bowser kidnapped the princess again and Mario has to save her and you know the rest!

Enjoy!

Do you like this level ? : You need to be registered to vote !
05/14/2015 06:31 am
The code-edit master : 8/10

well it had some tiling cuttoffs but it is good

09/18/2014 09:53 pm
Dukeonkled : 7/10

Gameplay: 38/50 - Overall the level was fun, but I think you could of added a few more enemies, especially in those small unused spaces, and maybe add a few more monty moles to the level other than the secret.
Design: 15/25 - The design is pretty good for a first level, but try and work on adding more scenery and eliminating the cutoffs.
Creativity: 17/25 - I can see you put a good amount of effort on this level, but I think you could do better. :P

Total points: 70/100
That's a 7, nice work.

09/18/2014 09:41 pm
SkoplerVision : 7/10

Gameplay was really good, also I liked how you employed every part of the level to avoid some unused space, unfortunately there are still unused space on the level, try next time to use it trying to add challenges.
The most remarkable flaw I saw was the cut-offs, you did good covering some tiling with layer 2, but there are may cut-offs, most important at 580x 240y (I recommend you to use tile 73), minor cut-offs at 1220x 240y (where you forgot to cover with pipe tiling), 2600x, from 240 to 0y (use tiles 73 and 40), all the secret room part and 3460x 240y (that I would recommend the same). Also the secret warp is difficult to find but I didn't like how you can reach to it, and like BF10 said, if you die you can get to the secret room once you got to the midway point.

You got 7.2

09/18/2014 07:38 pm
Factor M : 9/10

Good level just fix the mistakes mentioned above.

09/18/2014 07:16 pm
BF10 : 7/10

You have cutoffs, secret warps are hard to find, and if you die, and reach the midway point, you will automatically go to the secret because it uses entrance 2.