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My first level (Plz rate good)



Author : SuperMarioBros21

Votes : 11
Rating : 53%
Views : 745
Type : SMF1
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 09/05/2015
Status :
Section 3

Description :

It is my first level, it is not very long. again, it is my first level.

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08/15/2015 08:12 am
UwaisA88 : 1/10

Spammiest level evar!

08/11/2015 04:15 am
gamewarrior : 2/10

Rate this goods? Well it had potential at least, but the lvl crapped out until it was too eyesore to watch..

05/12/2015 12:34 pm
tri2003 : 4/10

it is way to short for a level monsters 1/3 gameplay 1/3 (kind of boring) scenery 0/1 (no scenery) challenge 1/3 (very easy) +1 your first level 4/10 (needs work)

05/11/2015 02:15 pm
Dragonfan : 7/10

Not Bad1 You need more scenery and the red koopas have a problem, but it's still nice! It should be longer though.

05/11/2015 09:56 am
Segomac : 2/10

First level or not, I'm not one who will award points for it. I feel as if it's better to be harsh for users to understand what's right or wrong in a level and be forced to fix their mistakes.

As you said, the level is very short, too short for the level portal rules, which state that the level should be X:2500 or longer. Also, scenery is a pretty important piece of a level that you'll need to add when making levels in this website. Add scenery to match some sort of theme of the level, to match the background, to make it look nice, etc. Also there were a small few of tile mistakes, like at ML X:1200 with the grass tiles. Use the edge pieces next time, although I won't deduct for that.Also make sure your enemy placement is great too, along with adding obstacles. The enemies you had placed could of been placed better, or it could of been modified by replacing some enemies or changing the layout of the level to make enemies easier to place. Try adding a few obstacles as well.

05/10/2015 10:51 pm
A Random Level Creator : 4/10

Short, boring, no scenery.
Almost no enemies and had poor tiling at some points.

+1 for first level.
But this is better than my first level, so another +1.
RATING: 4/10
Its not utter crap. Its bullshit.

05/10/2015 01:25 am
Pkmn trainer Jake : 10/10

look below and poor tiling not the 2 i will report the 2 rate

05/09/2015 09:28 pm
Daisy77 : 10/10

It's short, needs more scenery, and there is a lot of unused space. I didn't think this level was a "Very Bad Level" It just needs more improvement. Nice level for a first.

05/09/2015 09:17 pm
MarioFlashFan224 : 2/10

This was really really crappy....

Gameplay: 0/4 (soo boring!)
Monsta's: 0/3 (spam)
Scenery: 0/1 (WERE'S THE SCENERY? DID IT GO ON HOLIDAY?)
Tiling: 0.75/1 (1 cuttoff)
Other stuff: 0/2 (extremely short)

First level: +1

Overall rate: 1.75/10 (2) (Very Bad Level. Try harder next time.)