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New Super Mario World, World 1-6



Author : jamesbond13

Votes : 5
Rating : 86%
Views : 711
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Medium
Posted : 18/05/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

The first moving screen level of the game. Good luck!

No fake rating or you'll be banned! If you rate under a 10, please let me know what I did wrong!

Level Music:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5HN5MjZPfbI

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05/21/2014 02:50 pm
Lord Apoplexy : 7/10

I agree mostly with orangetack.

The level itself feels very boring, and bland at some points of the level. There simply isn't any action going on. Try adding more enemies to make the player feel thrilled, and ready for oncoming danger.

The second problem, is that it has a lot of nasty cutoffs. The pipe at x720, a checkpoint tiling error at x1560, a rail cutoff at x1720, another one at x2800, along with an unrealistic way of falling off. Geez. So many tiling problems. :S

Lastly, the "No use of L2 scenery for an autoscroll level" cliché. Remember to put scenery in L2 at the start of the level, to make the level more fascinating, and interesting to play through.

05/20/2014 11:13 pm
yoshiactoreggman : 9/10

Normally, I've seen athletic moving levels like these, whose levels or makers I won't mention. But, yours actually has the a2 enabled.

05/18/2014 11:30 am
orangetack : 7/10

Ok, first of all, you forgot to give the link to the custom music for both this level and your other one.
Now, onto the review. My main problem with it is that for an autoscroll level, it simply hasn't got enough going on. You need action, to keep the player from getting bored of waiting, and waiting is what I was doing a lot. The challenges were good but a bit plain, and maybe a bit on the repetitive side too. There were also some nasty-looking cutoffs, one with a pipe, one with the midpoint and some with the fencing scenery. The scenery was bland and repetitive, I suggest you put some in layer 2 to stay on the screen the whole time, or at least to vary the layer 1 scenery more than you did. Not too bad, but not your best. Overall rate: 6.5/10