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mario land- pipe world



Author : diogoluis2000

Votes : 5
Rating : 76%
Views : 654
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 15/07/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

i hope you enjoy

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07/15/2014 03:34 pm
SkoplerVision : 6/10

Agreed with TheLaughOutLoud in all. Some parts looks good, but others looks weird and bad.

As new user I can recommend the following document for more help: http://www.ultimategamelab.com/Games/SMF/Official%20Guide%20of%20PG/The%20Official%20Guide%20of%20PG%20(1st%20Edition).pdf

It is BRENDANT98's guide for beginners, I hope it helps you.

For now you got 6.2, luck next time

07/15/2014 05:08 am
TheLaughOutLoud : 5/10

You are new, eh? The level is okay, except...

No use of Layer 2 - It was used to prevent cuttoffs and other stuff(-1)
Checkpoint not working - To make sure that the checkpoint works, use Entrance 2(-1)
Cutoffs - Bits of cutoffs were seen(-1)
LOTS of unused space - Y space... (-2)
Wrong use of Mole Entrance - It will make it weird(-0.5)
No scenery - Add a bit of scenery for me(-1)

Since you are new at making levels... (+1)

Since you're a beginner I will make it 5.