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some crappy ground level (REUPLOADED)



Author : bigblast666

Votes : 5
Rating : 68%
Views : 765
Type : SMF1
Difficulty : Medium
Posted : 18/05/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

I may have accidently forgot to make a good exit.... so yeah....

orginal discription: Ok this my first ( and crap attempt) at SMF1 enjoy :P

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05/21/2014 12:10 pm
Lord Apoplexy : 5/10

Well... this level is a pretty generic SMF1 Underground Level. But the flaws themselves, stand out, to make me give this level a 5/10.

The first, and most obvious flaw, is a cliché. The "Two pipes connected into one, but the upper/left part of the pipe doesn't take you to the next part" cliché.

The second flaw, is in the bonus zone. The hole isn't large enough for two warps, and there isn't a wall at the beginning of the bonus zone, which should've been the main zone.

Thr third flaw, are the cutoffs. Try using edges, to make the tiling better. And let's not forget, barely any scenery involved.

The fourth flaw, is that some enemies and tiles are out of place. For the enemies, these go for the thwomps, fire bars, and some bullet bill cannons.
For the tiling, these go for the random ghost pillar tiling, and the silver pipe. Which should've been in a snow-themed world.

The last flaw, the "No small castle at the beginning/end" cliché. I would've added one, if I were you.

05/18/2014 10:13 pm
LevelSubmitter013 : 8/10

The level is just fine. Ok challenges, its just fine.

05/18/2014 04:17 pm
sonictails : 8/10

Ok. Better now that you have fixed it. Some funny tiling like the random bricks and the wrong tile at the corner of the silver pipe exit. The hammer bro burns in the lava and its a bit bland but, i had fun! You get an 8 good sir. P.S call the level something but a crappy underground level.