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Hold right (by Elazer)



Author : Elazer

Votes : 7
Rating : 75%
Views : 682
Type : SMF1
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 05/06/2015
Status :
Section 3

Description :

Hi guys! Thats my first "hold right" level but anyway i want you to rate fairly and if you have any idea how to improve that map - just write a comment ;-) I did some test and everything worked well for me. Hope you enjoy.

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02/12/2016 11:14 am
OMGCrawler : 9/10

This is awesome, But a little bit too short, so i'll give you a 9. Good job!

06/06/2015 03:07 pm
jacobcamo : 9/10

Good work! Although there was barely any scenery. Good for your first hold right. Congrats! Good!
9/10

06/05/2015 02:39 pm
pr00 : 10/10

Great hold right level!
Here are some errors, but it's your first level, so my rate is 10.

06/05/2015 01:20 pm
MasterKastyl1nos222 : 6/10

There's so much unused space (-)1.5. If you aren't going to use this, copy the code to Notepad, Microsoft Office Word or Wordpad and you can change 4180 to something smaller. The castle isn't good (-0.5) . Use tiles 101-117 to build it. This hold right is so boring (-1). There are some floating piranha plants in bonus zone (-0.5). This level also needs more scenery (-1). 5.5=6/10 - Not bad (Not a spam level)

06/05/2015 12:04 pm
Chris : 6/10

As the Hold Right trend is failing, I guess the need to impress more has turned up a notch.
Personally, I saw no real "risks" and "close-to-deaths" with this hold right. It's just... bland and boring. I cannot explain it, but it doesn't have the spark like some of the hold rights out there ;c
Keep practicing, add some real risks (for example, a thwomp is just a millimeter away from you but a miracle happens or something xD)

06/05/2015 09:58 am
MagicOTD : 6/10

It's extremely easy to make these levels. Well, this have lots of errors like unused space and bad tiling. Also, lava isn't allowed in main part. I hope lots agree with me that here are flaws and I cannot rate level high. You need more enemies, but few parts are overloaded with monsters and here is poor scenery. Overall, you try better next time in your normal and hold levels. My rate is 5,5/10, round up 6/10.