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Author : ireelydontnowlol

Votes : 9
Rating : 98%
Views : 609
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 27/12/2014
Status :
Section 2

Description :

This is the first level I made here!

Please don't fake rate and tell me below what I need to fix. Thanks!

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12/27/2014 09:59 pm
Multi : 10/10

Nice first level! :> 10/10

12/27/2014 05:38 pm
oomphalapompatronium : 10/10

*Sigh* not another great classic level maker...

I gonna say it now - great job. The level was wonderful in gameplay, scenery and layout. Ignoring a few scant problems it could get an easy 10, which I will give you now because it's your first level.

But I seriously suggest you change up your style. These kinds of "classic" levels are made a lot, and some people can find them getting boring after a while. If you want to REALLY impress people, try to be more creative. Like 09. He adds some creativity to his levels while still making them classic. This is what you should try to do, too.

As you get to know the site better, you'll understand what I mean better. I mean, if you want to keep making levels like this, go ahead. But it would be so great to have another person who makes a difference on this site.

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Thanks for listening. 10/10.

12/27/2014 05:23 pm
CREATIVE : 9/10

OMG this is your FIRST LEVEL???

Hardly anyone gets their first level in bests, I didn't even get my first level in bests. Go to your profile and check out my comment.

12/27/2014 04:57 pm
SkoplerVision : 10/10

Really nice for a first try. Since you're new I will add +1 point in this review.
The challenges on this level were varied and complete, without any bad enemy placement, this kind of thing is really difficult to see in new users. The design wasn't such amazing but is still good, from 1940x to 1780x and 3580x you employed too much tile 1, which made the level to look kind bad, finally at the end I would recomment to cover with layer 2 everything with cave tiling.
The important flaws were at gameplay, and mostly at 1940x to 2100x where the pipe can be easily jumped with yoshi usage (press x to jump high with yoshi, leaving it), making green and P-switch items be pointless, also the warp two (which alows you to get to the green P-switch) is pointless with the same jump at 1760x (where is the yellow pipe). Finally at 1840x the plant box is pointless because only you need to jump to recolect coins.

You got 8.8 (+ 1 = 9.8)

12/27/2014 04:33 pm
METALBEAVER : 10/10

AMAZING FIRST LEVEL!

Yeah, there were minor tiling errors, and maybe too many power ups, but was still great and enjoyable. 10/10

12/27/2014 03:42 pm
John, the Pixelated Guy! : 10/10

AMAZING 1st level! I'm simply shocked! There were a few tile errors and you can't really get the 1st "P-button", but hey! Why be cruel on a 1st level, you know? :) It's better than MY first level! (It ended up in spam :S)

12/27/2014 03:00 pm
cr8torGalaxy16 : 10/10

incredible level for a FIRST LEVEL!:)nice design, it reminds me of the original games on the old consoles.well done!:)