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Super Hills Level



Author : TheAllMightyWat

Votes : 5
Rating : 66%
Views : 730
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Medium
Posted : 23/06/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

My first level.
Enjoy!
BTW:Does anyone else thinks that is ridicolous the fact that we need at least 3 good/best levels to post a level with custom picture?

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06/24/2014 02:11 pm
AgentAttorney : 6/10

Alright, first level.
In the sand block section, remove the final slope tiles that are inside the platforms. It looks better that way.
Second, remove the floating tile section and do something different.
Third, fill in the platforms that you make. (The ones I refer to are the snow like tiles that have two supports).
Fourth, if you don't use the Y axis, make Y when you start out 240, then you don't have to worry.
Anyway, improve. 6.2/10

06/24/2014 06:06 am
Lord Apoplexy : 6/10

Agreed with felipe de farias.

This level has a ton of cutoffs. Most notably, are the yellow... cheese/desert room, the bush platforms, and other things in this level.

This level also feels a bit empty, flat, and boring, to be honest. I would at least make more hills, and vary the level themes more.

Thirdly, this level has unused Y-axis. A common cliché made by new users. Remember to use it, rather than leaving a void there to eat it up.

Lastly, Mario walks in the air, when he jumps past the goal point? The heck kind of logic is that? It's inhuman. It's unnatural. It's... EVERYTHING WRONG WITH LOGIC.

Yeah, I give it a 6/10. Sorry, mate. Even if you're new, I don't think, this level is for my tastes.

06/23/2014 11:01 am
felipe de farias : 7/10

for a first level is good. have some good challenges but there's a some of bad tilingand cutoffs(-2) and is a little empty(-1) = 7/10