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My first hold right



Author : luigi#2

Votes : 9
Rating : 76%
Views : 768
Type : SMF1
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 08/11/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

Watch mario/luigi go through many close calls, and a self playing boss!
Plz review!

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03/04/2015 10:12 am
CREATIVE : 5/10

Needed more close calls, more excitement, and less warps. The warps were too repetitive.. Also, it was kinda short. It needed more effort, more close calls, to make the hold fun. I'm not saying overloading monsters, but spice it up a bit... You know, some RREALLY good close calls that you could create.

Just so you know, this is not a fake rate...

5/10- CREATIVE, Official SMF1 Level Creator

12/21/2014 01:40 pm
xevilphantom : 6/10

Need more close calls. It wasn't exactly boring, but it's a good start. 6/10.

11/08/2014 09:23 am
oomphalapompatronium : 9/10

So... it wasn't bad at all. For a first hold right, it was pretty good, even. However, there were some issues. Allow me to explain...

- Warping. This hold level warped way too much, especially in the beginning. Warping slows down the hold and diminishes the effect, so try not to do it too often.
- Scenery. There wasn't a lot of scenery, and there were a few cutoffs I could see.

Well, these are the only problems I could find. For your first hold level, it was very good! Just try to take my advice and you'll do even better next time. 9/10.

11/08/2014 09:23 am
Orangetack : 4/10

Tbh, this level needed more close calls and fewer pipe warps. It needs fewer pipe warps because having lots of pipe warps breaks up the action. Try to have as few warps as you can in a hold level. And as for the close calls themselves, there weren't many, and none of them were really that impressive. There needs to be more stuff going on, otherwise a hold level is just boring to watch. And it needed more scenery, there was only a little scenery in a few spots and that was it.
Overall rate: 4/10 (Sorry for the low rate, this is not a fake rate)