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ultimate mario level 1-1 a new adventure



Author : anlund2013

Votes : 7
Rating : 60%
Views : 634
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 27/07/2014
Status :
Section 3

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08/02/2014 10:48 am
j-boy : 6/10

I thought it was cool I'm not super good so I died a lot...

08/02/2014 10:10 am
winitall : 2/10

I find it wasn't good even for a first level. You need to put in more effort if you want others to like it.

07/29/2014 01:48 pm
Team Bowser Games : 6/10

Ok, I'm going to discount the gradius levels and say this is your first level. For what it was, it was okay.
-A major problem was the flatness of the level. Try to use the grass tile to elevate the level and make challenges that incorporate platforming challenges.
-Enemy placement was not all that good. The level was bland because you rarely had to deal with any enemies or platforming challenges. Try to have enemies and platforms combine to make unique challenges.
-make sure you end tile sets like grass tiles with curves on all edges.
-Goomba overload, try to stay away from this. I actually did the same thing in my first level too so it's perfectly okay for now.
-Don't end bodies of water on brown or grey tile that doesn't connect because it looks ugly.
-Try to add layer 2 scenery, like mushroom pillars or grass platforms in the background.
For a first level, you have many things to work on, but I think you're getting better. I would like to see your next levels.