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My Very First Level



Author : Flip Flap Fwalala (OFFICIAL)

Votes : 10
Rating : 87%
Views : 683
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 23/10/2014
Status :
Section 2

Description :

Welcome to my first level. I hope you enjoy!

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11/01/2014 10:50 am
superglitch : 10/10

You have a nice level. However, you have some slope glitches where Mario goes through slopes. I am still giving you a 10 because you were very creative.

10/24/2014 08:39 am
felipe de farias : 8/10

i agree with retzorg, is a good level for a begginer, can be better, but you're a begginer. this level looks very classic, with funny gameplay. yeah, have some slope glitches, i think is better if you read the PG guide, is good for begginers, you can made a perfect tiling. also, this level is very empty, if you don't like make big level in Y size, just made a level with Y:240 in editor. this level is empty and need scenery and design, use more tree and dirt tiling. you can see my design in my overworld levels. to finish, i think i some parts is bit boring, to flat and bit enemies. try to use more jumps and tricks, with koopas and others enemies. my final rate can be 7/10 but i will give to you +1, so my final rate is = 8/10 welcome to PG dude :)

10/24/2014 02:56 am
RetzorgIII : 8/10

This is pretty good for a first level, but there are some mistakes. Most notable is the slope glitches; you used the wrong slope corner tiles, so when walking on this level's slopes, Mario falls through the ground. Also, the bonus zone is rather unsatisfactory; there's the repeated mistake of having a bonus zone hidden the very top of the level. If you want to have a bonus zone, put it at the end of the x-axis span of the level beyond the goal point; you can use some of my levels, or better yet, the levels of experienced users such as przem1994, as examples. Also, don't use tiles that are only solid on top (such as cloud tiles) as walls, because they don't work as walls. Still, it would've been nice if Usuario Latino ''ErpibullJones had actually explained their 8/10 rate instead of just using the vote log…