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Just a Nice Stroll (Hold Right)



Author : LariosonicWJT

Votes : 21
Rating : 98%
Views : 1216
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 27/12/2014
Status :
Section 2

Description :

After about two months of back aching work from staring at my computer screen, here's my secret level! I changed the theme to one type instead of crazy amounts of them (Zeldamaster12 made the suggestion). Some areas were clones from other hold levels which makes this level a little reminder of a certain hold level...*COUGH*....DRM's At the Bottom: Hold Right. Anyways, enjoy this hold right level people! :D

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01/11/2016 07:46 pm
FullMetalDragon : 10/10

Lots of nice tiles/scenery make it a really great hold right. "Captain Dragon" reminds me of my username!

Overall score: 10/10

-FMD, The Master of Puppets

07/30/2015 04:46 pm
Crashm8101 : 10/10

This level is why they would invent the 11/10 option.

05/10/2015 09:48 am
MdeMushroomxD : 10/10

Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Obviously 10!!!

02/14/2015 08:00 am
7SuperMarioBros7 : 9/10

That must have been really hard for you to build! I'd like to point out that the mushroom stalk scenery isn't really properly capped with that bridge log scenery (many people do this but I find it very odd and cutoff). Upside down bullet bill blasters is a great idea but when performed in SMF2, it kinda has tiling cutoff.
By the way, why did you add Torpedo Teds? They only suit well in water stages (there may be a few exceptions but still...)
Despite of the complaints mentioned above, this hold level had many close calls and lots of placement precision! The sprite, the tiling... very nicely done. Just what a great hold level should have. :)

My final vote is 9.30 (9/10). Good job, WJT!

12/30/2014 04:23 am
Orangetack : 9/10

What a great hold level to end the year. Very fast-paced with lots of close calls, and it was great how you went through areas more than once, but not enough times to make it repetitive. There were slightly too many pipe warps and one or two wait times, but other than that it was amazing. As for the scenery, I didn't like it that much. It was really messy, and had too many themes in a lot of places. Even so, this is one of my favourite holds of the year.

9/10 -Orangetack, Level Critic

12/28/2014 04:21 am
Q12546wer22 : 10/10

AMAZING FREAKIN HOLD RIGHT,ONE OF MY FAVORITE HOLD SO FAR!!
okay let's review...there's so many close calls and I can't even knew where the enemy comes,it have about the same high of close calls count with the golden age :O
though here's the flaws:
1.I can see some part are cut offs (X940Y220 there's a stair cutoff for example) and a bit messy scenery (X3880Y320 for example)
2.X2980Y20 lol floating munchers
3.X4920Y380 there's a big wait time on yoshi
4.X0Y0 hey you have same flaw on my hold down 2.0 :P
but seriously,I saw yoshi egg slice at X4920Y380
AWESOME YOSHI SLICE
auto 10/10 also cool boss battle

12/27/2014 04:45 pm
09dhowell : 10/10

This is fast and furious, no doubt about it. A great length too, I must have been watching for at least 3 minutes. I liked how you were coming out of the same pipe sometimes but once with yoshi, another with big mario, very ATB. The main flaw was the massive overuse of p switches which made the music messy and distracted me from some of the wonderful close calls. Mario must have hit at least 8 p switches and it was repetitive, you could have thrown a star in there or a bigger variety of monsters, there were a lot of chucks and p switches going on. My ears were not liking the music from the moment the first p switch had been hit. The tiling was good and there was some nice finishing touches in there with the scenery. Fantastic to watch, had this been posted a week earlier, this would definitely have got you nominated for best hold level and best hold level maker possibly. Solid effort, amazing job!

Overall Rate: 9.5/10

12/27/2014 03:41 pm
SkoplerVision : 10/10

I didn't spotted the "at the bottom" DRM level reference (even it doesn't has too much that time that I have played it). Anyway, I need to say this was an amazing hold right level, like mrckv3 said, it had clever close calls, the way you put enemies was great. I don't see any problem with the design.
Creative level.

You got 10/10

12/27/2014 11:53 am
cr8torGalaxy16 : 10/10

amazing level with unusual but cool cbg and the holding right was fabulous.nice scenery and design.but at x:1180 y:240 there was ghost house stairs next to grass tiling which i thought was a bit weird.anyway incredible level!:)

12/27/2014 08:41 am
oomphalapompatronium : 10/10

HOORAY, IT'S FINALLY HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anyway, this was an amazing hold level. It was unique with tons on close calls, and the scenery was cool too. I have to agree with mrckv3 about everything he said, but I will spare you a 10 nonetheless because this level was astounding!!

P.S. I liked the Boom-Boom battle.

12/27/2014 07:52 am
felipe de farias : 10/10

:) this amazing it's so level

12/27/2014 07:51 am
mrckv3 : 9/10

Yeah the start was definately a kind of a clone. :p
Let me start of by saying that this is a very, very good hold. You had a lot of nice and clever close calls, not relying too much on mushrooms but actually dodging the stuff instead. You also didn't overload the level with close calls either.

The scenery was... well, it was okay, though you had a ton of errors. Furthurmore it just looked very messy in general, and sometimes made it a bit confusing to watch. Simpllify your scenery a bit more, especially in holds as that's the only one out of two factors you can really judge at.

I liked the fact that you went through the areas severel times, but sometimes it was hard to realise it with this messy scenery. Also, you might've warped a few too many times, I know it makes testing so much faster, but try and use fewer warps, it kinda cuts the action. You didn't use as many as some of the others, but still a good bunch.
Sorry, but no 10/10 :c Really really close though!

12/27/2014 07:36 am
luigi master 1 : 10/10

best level ever he must have taken hours to finish it its just so amazin 10/10

12/27/2014 02:05 am
przem1994 : 10/10

I wanted to be the first. Anyway, great Hold right level. You get a 10/10 :)

12/27/2014 01:06 am
minecraftdude5963 : 10/10

♦Such tile♦ •Much fun• -10 +- ♫Wooow♫ →Awesome↓

12/27/2014 12:52 am
Physics : 10/10

12/27/2014 12:40 am
Popthatcorn14 : 10/10

Where is Przem anyways? Anyways, nice level, WJT, i enjoyed the gameplay. 10 worthy.

12/27/2014 12:27 am
RetzorgIII : 10/10

YAY I GOT HERE BEFORE PRZEM GOOD LEVEL I R8 88/8 M8