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Mario takes the rainbow-W1-L1-



Author : Rainbowoverload

Votes : 4
Rating : 77%
Views : 584
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Medium
Posted : 20/11/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

Hello, to..anyone who cares, i am Rainbow overload and this is my first level, i'm sorry if it's crap, the story will go along with each level i post and will someone please show me how to PROPERLY create a warp pipe? Every time i try it comes up killing me or not working. anyway, thank you for playing, and please...PLEASE... enjoy <3

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11/20/2014 09:01 pm
SkoplerVision : 6/10

Well, being your first level I will add you 0.5 points on my rate. Before reviewing, welcome to PG, we hope you like the site.

Well, the level has several flaws, the most notable are the cut-offs, I know the kind of tiles you employed maybe have not a complete gamma, but for example for the beginning you could add tile 140 when finifhing with a tile 173 part; on the part from 940x 240y to 0y you can still use tile 170 for ceiling and tile 171 and 172 for right and left side, also tile 175 to connect left side with ceiling, for the other side you should use tile 140. Also presenting such grass tiles at the end are probably odd.
Other thing you can do is using layer 2 for design.
Mostly of the challenges were good but there is some bad monster placement like in 1920x.
The level has not appreciable design and the space was used in a good way but it can be better. (considering y axis parts).

You got 5.2 (+ 0.5) = 5.7

11/20/2014 08:31 pm
yoshi2318 : 7/10

wan't that bad actually. i had fun playing. though there was weird tiling and misplaced enemys but not too much.

11/20/2014 07:55 pm
Factor M : 10/10

Good level especially for somebody new but you have to put a 'start point Mario' near the Continue Point to make it do anything when Mario loses.