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Author : MarioFlashFan224

Votes : 5
Rating : 64%
Views : 687
Type : SMF1
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 15/04/2015
Status :
Section 3

Description :

It's as simple as it sounds, please, no fake rates! this is my first...

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04/26/2015 08:14 pm
PieHunter : 3/10

The level is just uninteresting in terms of obstacles or visuals. Ask yourself 1) Is it fun? and 2) is it visually pleasing? And if it's neither, continue working on the level. If you were making a treetop jumping level, for instance, you would want to avoid empty areas or flat areas such as your ending of the level.

The length is also an issue since site rules state that it needs to be more than x:2500. Overall not a great level, but then again, what first level isn't? I mean my first level was garbage, not gonna even deny that. But don't take this review as mean-spirited: first levels are usually never good, but so are other firsts. Take this review as an opportunity to learn and improve from your mistakes, and I'm sure you will become a great level maker in the future.

04/21/2015 07:45 am
pr00 : 7/10

Crap scenery and tilling ( lava in the land??? ) (-2), it's a bit too short (-2), It's your first level (+1). Overall: 7/10

04/16/2015 08:23 am
Squidward : 8/10

Meh, it was an okay first level. The level was to short. Make it at least x2500, A couple of cut offs, and in my opinion don't put lava tiles on grass tiles.
8, At least you didn't do any monster overloads!

04/15/2015 09:23 pm
oomphalapompatronium : 6/10

eh... i suppose i've seen worse first levels... this ain't to terrible, but it's full of problems. i'll explain them to you so you can get better.
- no one likes theme-mixing. the castle pillars and lava with the overworld theme didn't look good at all. try to avoid that.
- there were lots of cutoffs, like with the lava and mushroom pillars. an easy fix.
- unnecessary warps. warps do not make the level better. the two warps you had in the level were pointless. take them out.
- enemy placement was bad. there wasn't enough monsters, and it doesn't matter that you rated it easy. add some more!!
- not enough scenery. there wasn't any scenery here, which was especially bad considering how flat the map was.
- this level is way too short. it even breaks the rule.

normally i'd give it an auto-1 because you broke a rule, but i'll give it a 6 because the rules also say to give newer users a chance. good luck in future levels!!!!!