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Super Mario World 1-1



Author : ljrogier

Votes : 5
Rating : 78%
Views : 643
Type : SMF1
Difficulty : Medium
Posted : 14/07/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

This is my first level... I think it tuned out pretty well. Comments are appreciated!

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07/15/2014 07:37 pm
jakobguy : 9/10

it was o.k. but more scenery would be a lot better 9/10

07/15/2014 05:12 pm
Team Bowser Games : 8/10

Starting at the beginning, good mix of tiles, looked unique. At x600, the grass layered didn't look good. It cut off the 2nd layer. I'd reccommend using SMF2 to utilize 2 different layers so those mistakes can be avoided. I thought the goombas in the pits looked a little weird because they were moving too fast. The part with the brown tile platforming was a little bland, maybe add some monsters. The bonus zone was sloppy. Make sure all warp pipes are finished and all warps go in and out pipes or in a door. Make sure you round off all grass tiles. Avoid lava in a grass level. Don't make the player go above the screen, it's very confusing. A little too many bullet bill cannons at the end. Overall, try adding more grass and trees. Great first level, I'm excited to play your other levels!

07/14/2014 11:03 pm
dtaylor17 : 7/10

Gameplay: 35/50. Some bullet overload and a little flat. Could be a lot better.

Tiling: 8/15. A lot of bad tiling, but O.K for your first level.

Length: 13/15. Somewhat empty, but average length.

Work: 6/10. Looks like a level that I could make in 10 minutes. Try to spend at least an hour on a level.

Scenery: 2/10. No scenery at all.

TOTAL: 66/100. OK level, good enough.

07/14/2014 11:02 pm
arqda5658 : 9/10

Pretty good level! I enjoyed the challenges. However, there were some bad tiling(e.g. Bonus Zone X:320 that pipe. The rest should be finished). More scenery would be great, though. But since this is your first level, I won't rate badly: 9/10!!! Good job. Keep up the good work!