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The strange airship



Author : airplane123

Votes : 6
Rating : 68%
Views : 582
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Hard
Posted : 11/07/2015
Status :
Section 3

Description :

This is my first level, so there will probably be lots of errors. Anyway, Boom-Boom has ground and air forces out to get you. Can you make it to the end and retrieve the magic ? ball?
Please do the following things.
1. Take advantage of the colliding Koopa Troopa Shells at the beginning.
2. Bump the block above the Bullet Bill Cannons after killing Boom-Boom.
3. No swearing in reviews.
4. Sometimes, people may give OK ratings just because it is their first level. Don't do that. Tell me the truth.
5. If you give me less than 5, give me tips for next time.
Thanks.
-airplane123

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07/12/2015 05:06 pm
mathfreak231 : 7/10

You are so amazing in your rate requirements. Especially #4. JUST FOR THAT, you are cool. I don't agree with the comments besides cutoffs. I would suggest making sure that you don't use the wrong variant of tile 385 (Breakable brick)

07/12/2015 07:23 am
MagicOTD : 4/10

I should agree with BF10 for some flaws. Also, you know it's very bad level. There are very bad tiling in all level, esspecially airship tiling and water in L2 (-3). Why water is placed on layer 2? Remove it. Also, use tile 285 with tile 280 to prevent cutoffs. Also, there are lots of monster overloads (-2). Reduce monster's amount (1-3) to prevent overloads. Koppa Troopa shells at beginning is very spammed and you get lots of lifes (-1). Never do that. This level needs also more scenery in level (-1). For example, use tiles 40 and 73. Overall, this very spammed level needs lots of improving because it's a spam level. But it's first level, I add a +1 point.

Overall score 4/10

07/11/2015 06:58 pm
karatekidaustin : 6/10

As a first level, your knowledge on warps on autoscrolling was great. But with a laggy shell mess at the begining, cutofs and just bad tilting...I wasn't a fan.

07/11/2015 06:14 pm
Bruno Cristian Rocha : 10/10

Good level buddy <:)
But this level have many Monster Overloads and Bad tiling too.
More scenery at next time Ok buddy?
I'll give you 10 note anyway, I am generous <:)

B.C.R.

07/11/2015 05:22 pm
BF10 : 4/10

OK, firstly, you spammed tons of monsters, so use less next time. Also, the colliding Koopa Troopa Shells at the beginning is not really allowed as a 1-up generator. Also, you may want to use more scenery and remove layer 2 water. I also see hidden warps, which you need to remove.