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Mario in the USA: Pennsylvania (Tag w/ Factor M)



Author : Popthatcorn14

Votes : 13
Rating : 91%
Views : 833
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Extreme
Posted : 19/03/2015
Status :
Section 2

Description :

This is a tag level by me and Factor M.
Factor M: 0x-5080x
Popthatcorn14: 5080x-9180x

Pennsylvania, the Keystone State. This state is filled with many challenges for you to wait, as well as Keyholes. Can you make your way out of here? Play and find out!

3 facts about Pennsylvania:
1. Keystone State (Symbol used at 8760x)
2. Hershey is considered the Chocolate Capital of the United States, which is in Pennsylvania.
3. The Declaration of Independence was signed in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in 1776.

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08/04/2015 07:34 pm
RetzorgIII : 10/10

"Why the ¤¤¤¤ did you decide to work with Factor M from the beginning? THAT IS WHAT KILLS ANY CHANCE OF THIS LEVEL GETTING A 10/10!"

For the same reason I worked with benvincent917 back in October 2014. Any user should deserve to work with any other user, regardless of their level-making quality. That's just plain mean, yelling at Pop for working with a user whose level-making you don't like and literally calling Factor M's level-making skill "cancer." If you make art for getting good reviews and not for the fun of making it, you're not a very good artist.

07/03/2015 01:09 pm
salt and pepper : 8/10

There's really no need to use cancer as an insult lord apoplexy. It makes you look like an idiot and you're clearly overreacting

The challenges are nicely done and well thought out. I do love the custom background but the tiling is pretty bad and i think Factor M made the challenges a bit too repetitive. Although it doesn't mean Factor M's section is bad. I did enjoy it but i feel that the tiling needs to be worked on and be more creative with the challenges

06/24/2015 02:13 pm
Lord Apoplexy : 6/10

Why the ¤¤¤¤ did you decide to work with Factor M from the beginning? THAT IS WHAT KILLS ANY CHANCE OF THIS LEVEL GETTING A 10/10!

I'm sorry, but this has to be one of the cheapest levels I've played. Don't get me wrong, some of the challenges are alright. But the cheapness factor just exceeds the fun factor for me here.
Most of the challenges are cheap, especially the two switches part, where you have to use a reserve mushroom. By the time you get there, you might have used the reserve mushroom by accident! And there's no way out for you, and GOOD LUCK FINDING ANOTHER RESERVE MUSHROOM AFER THAT!
Factor M's section is pure cancer reincarnated. The challenges are extremely cheap, there is horrid airship tiling, and some of the monsters are cheaply placed. Such as the swoops and volcano lotuses. Your section is better, yes. But it does suffer a bit of the same problems as Factor M's sections. Not counting the bad tiling. It comes more from the cheapness factor.

5.5/10

03/22/2015 08:31 am
cr8torGalaxy16 : 8/10

This level is alright. You had a different choice to other levels but I'm always up for something new. Everywhere, there were many cut offs such as the green vines, the scenery with the water at x620 y200, the piranha plant hanging upside down on tile 1 at x740 y160 and the airship tiling. Pop's area was better than Factor M's but you both equally made messy with the bad airship tiling.
I also have to complain about the cbg, I don't know if both of you agreed to use a cut off background but it didn't look good. The forest theme was a good idea although you need the right cbg and concepts to make the level amazing and every time I move either to the left or right, the cbg cuts.
Make sure next time that this doesn't happen again.

7.75-cr8torGalaxy16, Scenery Master

03/20/2015 11:28 pm
SkoplerVision : 8/10

Even this had truly fun and enjoyable challenges and a extreme difficulty, this wasn't perfect.
In the whole level, the CBG employed by you two wasn't a good choice because the left side doesn't fits with the right one; and also, once you get one the mid-way point, when you die, Mario returns to the Factor M's water section, being those the most important flaws.
However, I want to attribute Pop for his part, which was the most difficult and most varied, with backtracks and everything it felt like a 9000x size level.
For the other hand, I must say Factor M's part was bad, the bad airship tiling, repetitive challenges, cut-offs and some monster overload made his part not so good.
Looking at Pop's part I really wanted to give this 10, but with some many flaws I can't easily give it.
Nice level, but you two should work more on it, especially Factor M.

8.3/10

03/20/2015 09:25 pm
Felix33 : 10/10

Awesome Pennsylvania level with good gameplay with nice background 10/10

03/20/2015 07:29 am
felipe de farias : 9/10

my review is too long to submit here, so you can read here: http://pastebin.com/Q38xEkkh

Factor M = 7.5/10
Popthatcorn14 = 9.8/10

03/20/2015 07:26 am
oomphalapompatronium : 10/10

nice.

03/20/2015 03:29 am
przem1994 : 10/10

Awesome Tag level. Factor M's part has bad airship tiling, but nice scenery and chalenges. Pop's part is very good with using airship tiling, cool scenery and challenges. Good work :)

FM: 9/10
Pop: 10/10

Overall rate: 9.5/10.

03/20/2015 01:31 am
Factor M : 10/10

The first waterway has Eeries because the Eerie Canal and Pop's side is so hard - wow!

03/20/2015 12:33 am
Productions005 : 10/10

Nice level, scenery, challenge and Pennsylvania :D
10/10
Prodcutions005, Official Spanish SMF1 Level Creator