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Mario's Expeditions 1 - 1 "Goomba Land"



Author : 24mph

Votes : 5
Rating : 78%
Views : 554
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 24/03/2015
Status :
Section 3

Description :

This is my first level series. So please give a rating, no unfair ratings or sarcastic ratings cause I put a lot of effort in this start. I made this start a long level so you can see what will happen next and to prepare.

STORYLINE

One day, Mario walked and strolled in Mushroom Kingdom, there were many toads! But he saw one black creature, a toad-shaped creature. He ran to the lost woods, he never saw him again.


Next day, the Mushroom Kingdom was so quiet. Peach was only there. She said, "The toads! They're captured by Bowser! Help those toads, they went to Goomba Land!"

The adventure starts.. now.

by 24mph

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03/25/2015 09:16 am
7SuperMarioBros7 : 7/10

Let's get to this classic styled SMF2 level: this was a bit tricky for a 1-1, with some minor close calls and great gameplay which is what stands out the most in this level.
However, I saw some tiling cutoffs at x360 and basically where the water wave tile isn't correctly capped with dirt/grass tile.
I should warn you that putting pirnanha plants in places other than pipes is not okay, it's like a half step to a blind run.
You must pay a lot of attention when using a diagonal pipe: if it's not patched with 162 or with S tile, bad things happen like the death glitch when the player runs towards the diagonal pipe's base.
Also, one midway point is enough in this level. If you want to put a midway point, make sure to place a second player entrance in front of it.
Try to vary your scenery usage a little bit too.
The amount of monsters at some portions could should be tuned down as well, hence monster overloads.
Despite of what I've mentioned, this is a averagely nice level.

7/10 - Goods
Try to do what I suggested previously. Good luck on your future levels!

03/24/2015 09:45 pm
superstarfire33 : 7/10

Well, I don't have much to describe this in one summary, but you might need to consider fixing the monster placement, cutoffs, and bush scenery. Will rate this a 7.

03/24/2015 08:07 am
METALBEAVER : 8/10

There is bad enemy placement (fishes above water) and some cut offs. +, too much bushes is "pro" for this level, not "con". 8/10

MB

03/24/2015 07:31 am
Extra_Mushroom : 8/10

Couple of glitches on the enemies and too much bushes.