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mario's adventure 2-5 the road to castle #2



Author : tylerthegreat

Votes : 5
Rating : 84%
Views : 711
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 09/09/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

after mario found the door in that mansion, he must travel through this little path.

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09/12/2014 07:36 am
Lord Apoplexy : 7/10

While this was a level had some nice scenery, and decent challenges, this level isn't perfect. And as with my every review, it must have the "Let me explain you why" sentence. So, let's get to it.

Well, firstly, this level has a ton of blind jumps everywhere. Well, only 3 or 4. But it still counts as many blind jumps. An indication where to land would be nice, rather than just guess your way to correctly jump to. It's just unfair, if you land incorrectly, and have to redo the entire level over again. While losing a life.

Secondly, there are a lot of rail cutoffs. Make sure to add a pillar to where the cutoff is, so the rail doesn't look like a cutoff.

Thirdly, the y-axis is pretty much unused. Except for minor parts of blocks, coins, and enemies. But the mushroom hills could expand higher up to the sky, so the void doesn't have to swallow up nearly the entire level portal with unused space.

Please improve on these problems, and you should become a great level maker.