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Green Forest



Author : RaymondPlaysSuperMario123

Votes : 5
Rating : 78%
Views : 863
Type : SMF1
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 14/11/2015
Status :
Section 3

Description :

There is a bonus near the flag pole.

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11/21/2015 03:05 am
Major Sparky : 6/10

I like the no-frills layout, but is is quite short and there is unused space. Nevertheless, I still have potential in you.

11/14/2015 09:45 am
InsaneSanic : 8/10

For your first level, it was actually not bad. I liked how basic it was, most level nowadays are complex and harder to rate, but this is quite simple. Firstly, there is a rule for posting levels that a level should be around 2500x to 3500x long, your was 2400x total, I will reduce but not as much as I will do to other levels. Secondly, you also don't put a lot of enemies is a small area, in your cave area, there was 5 goombas and 4 koopas, the 5 goombas together in that area is considered as a enemy spam and its against the rules, same for the 4 koopas. Again, I wont reduce as much as I do for others, since it you first level. Lastly, scenery. Scenery makes levels more appealing. There scenery tiles in the game that you should have used to make you level more appealing. Your final score is a 8/10! I see high potential in you! Hope this helps!

~InsaneSanic
P.S- ill leave a link to the portal faq, where the rules are located.