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my first EVER hold right!



Author : tylerthegreat

Votes : 10
Rating : 85%
Views : 984
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 25/08/2014
Status :
Section 2

Description :

this is my first ever hold right, so dont judge! and sorry about the unused space. just keep holding right even if you die!!! ps. MARIO IS A ZOMBIE!!!

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09/13/2014 08:38 pm
JCD_aka_Thorston : 10/10

Sheesh, Orangetack!


Little bland, but I think it was pretty good for your first.

09/02/2014 02:13 pm
Orangetack : 3/10

I have to be honest, it wasn't good. Hardly anything happened, there were not really any true close calls, just bouncing on enemies, and the layout was flat-ish. It was just really boring to watch. The only thing I can credit the level with is that you have to die, but then I've seen a few holds that implement it in a more creative way. Also, there were lots of tiling errors throughout, where you didn't use layer 2. I know this is your first hold right, so just use this advice to improve next time. :)
Overall rate: 3/10

08/30/2014 08:30 am
Q12546wer22 : 8/10

Agree with everyone there's almost no close calls,it have,but not many.scenery is kinda bad,not enough,and some small cut-offs.most part are a bit boring,unuse space,though a bit of part I like it. I will give this a 5 or 6(I'm very harsh on hold levels),but since it's your first hold and die stuff is pretty good,so I give a 8 this time :P

08/25/2014 11:09 pm
RetzorgIII : 9/10

It's pretty creative, but bland at spots. I agree with the general consensus.
This level is like Narbacular Drop: It's revolutionary, but could be presented better. Still, I feel like practice makes perfect; keep at it, and may one day create the Portal 2 to this level's Narbacular Drop! (Sorry if my metaphor is confusing. ^_^')

08/25/2014 04:16 pm
winitall : 10/10

This is the first hold-level out of so many that i have played, that i actually really enjoyed! it's fun and well timed and well designed without being overwhelming like so many other hold-levels. really well done!!!!

08/25/2014 01:14 pm
felipe de farias : 8/10

well, it's your first level and i think is a good and very simple hold right level. there's some good points like the bullet bills and that stuff you need die to continue, is a great idea. i never see this in a hold level. anyway, is a good work but can be better. the level is very blank, need more design. for the hold challanges, i agree with oompha. nned more close calls and have small waiting times, sometimes this is very boring. to finish, have some cutoffs and there's unused space = 8/10

08/25/2014 12:53 pm
Creatorman : 9/10

Unused space, but great. i like what you die and you continues.
i like the tilling.
my rate is a 9

08/25/2014 12:24 pm
oomphalapompatronium : 9/10

Great first hold right!
Problems:
- Unused space (I'm glad you referenced it, but it's still a problem)
- Some small waiting times
- It could use some more close calls
Since it's your first, 9/10.

08/25/2014 12:23 pm
TheJ-rad7 : 10/10

Nice

08/25/2014 11:34 am
crash kandicoot : 9/10

This was creative. You die but you continue alive.
Unused space, so a 9 for yah'.

9/10 - Have a Cookie.