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Author : Banned

Votes : 5
Rating : 82%
Views : 714
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 22/07/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

yay this is my first level

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07/22/2014 05:16 am
marioandbowser : 8/10

Not too bad, but
1. It is very flat. Try to make the land in stairs or something.
2. Midway Point, as below. The entrance that says "2" will be the start position of the midway point.
Good job for trying to show scenery by putting grasses! +2 for first level!

07/22/2014 01:13 am
arqda5658 : 9/10

Pretty great level! But there is some problems:
1)SCENERY. Add some scenery.
2)MIDWAY POINT. Remember, people will take off points for broken midway point(or MP that doesn't work) Put the 2nd Entrance(ALWAYS THE SECOND ENTRANCE! Third, fourth, fifth, etc. Will NOT work) anywhere(I highly recommend putting it near the MP.
3)KEYHOLE IN THE AIR. The keyhole in the air is not looking great. Try putting something to make it not look like floating keyhole
4)Since this is your first level, I'll be nicer: raised 6 to 9!