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My First Level



Author : TLester221

Votes : 6
Rating : 68%
Views : 799
Type : SMF1
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 26/04/2014
Status :
Section 3

Description :

My first attempt at a level. It is a SMF1 level to start out. Most of my other levels will probably be SMF2. Hopefully you guys enjoy the level. See ya later.
~TLester221 (Tim Lester)

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04/26/2014 07:42 am
MasterKastylinos222 : 8/10

There are some cutoffs (-0,5) and unused bonus zone (-2)=7,5

04/26/2014 05:01 am
someone123456 (second account) : 7/10

It isn't bad for a first level. But, there are some things you could improve: some cut-offs, like at X:2900, level blandness and flatness, unused space after goal point, and level is empty, add some scenery and decorative tiles, look on my former profile for some scenery levels (http://www.pouetpu-games.com/index.php?section=4&id=91855 - one of my levels). +1 point because it's you first level. Sorry for bad English.

04/26/2014 04:03 am
priya asthana12345 : 8/10

Good job.... but tiling should be improved... for example, @X 1300, Tyle 127,128 are suitable for that mushroom tiles...intead of tyle 140...and try adding some bushes and some decorative tiles to make scenery look better... :)