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My First Level



Author : LoftyNine7

Votes : 7
Rating : 81%
Views : 898
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 17/04/2015
Status :
Section 3

Description :

This is my first ever level, I hope you enjoy it!
Have Fun!

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06/29/2015 08:56 am
The code-edit master : 7/10

well it felt kinda empty and flat, also a bit more monsters would be nice...
oh and there was some bad tiling and tiling cuttoffs

04/21/2015 06:55 am
asdfghjkla : 10/10

Fix the level and add lot of scenery and fill up unused spaces in the next update!

04/18/2015 01:38 am
Pkmn trainer Jake : 10/10

Some poor tiling -0.5 and unused space/flat -1 but first level +1 = 9.5 =10

04/17/2015 09:05 pm
jc8000rules : 7/10

Alright, I thought this was a pretty good level! The difficulty and scenery still leave something to desire, as I found the level fairly simple (only one death) and there isn't a whole lot to it. I'm pretty new to this myself but I still thought I would give you some feedback.

04/17/2015 05:36 pm
tylerthegreat : 7/10

I liked it, a GREAT first level.
But ofcourse, It needs work.

FLAWS:
No use of y area (top of level) including the gap of nothingness at 1600x 240y. -1

Level felt flat and boring. (Try to put hills, obsticles, and clouds, etc.) -1

Unnecisarry warp doors at 980x 240y. -0.5

little scenery. (This means objects that make the level look pleasant, bushes, diagonal dirty stalks, mushrooms, etc.) -1

Other than that, I liked it!
Use these tips to help you in the future!


6.5 = 7/10 Good.