TheNeto06TheNeto06
July 31, 2019
ToT

VagenturecbosVagenturecbos
November 9, 2015
nice, very archetypal. But the grammar... eek. Are you a native speaker? you need a bit of help with English Composition, k? ;)


Nittram responds:
In my defense, I was 14 and I'm not a native speaker ahahaha, but thank you anyway :3

omurahomurah
March 9, 2014
Why people say it's long ?
5mn is not long.
well, i also enjoyed the paradox concept. Still, i didn't fully understand the ending -that's why i gave it 4 instead of 5

mrpeaceisheremrpeaceishere
January 28, 2013
So i would assume the cycle of Imashi waking up and releasing the Evil Imashi?


Nittram responds:
Yup n.n

itsthelenchoitsthelencho
December 9, 2012
I love the music! Did you write it?


Nittram responds:
Yes, I wrote everything. Thanks! :D

Domomo
August 17, 2012
It had a pretty fascinating plot and story. The story was a bit long and the dialogue appeared a bit too slow after each, I'm assuming, "paragraphs". And I especially enjoyed the paradox and the music. The music fit really well. I realize that this is kindof random, but if you did continue the story, would it be the same "ending" since the "new" Imashi had not changed, and the world had already changed. I don't know, just curious. But all in all, a nice story that wasn't really predictable.


Nittram responds:
The idea of the plot was that it was a paradox, yes. n.n

tkdKickChicktkdKickChick
April 2, 2012
A good story, I came across this when I checked your page for the next chapter of 416. The music fits the story very well, and I love the paradox in the story. Not as great as 416, but still a good little story. Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing more of your visual novels in the future.


Nittram responds:
Ha ha, thanks!!

Indeed, it is not a story as 416. It's something I dreamed of and just wanted to show it to the world :D

SonicThadSonicThad
February 18, 2012
I kinda like this, but it is long. The main character seems like the miminga Sue from Cave Story on the surface to help someone.


Nittram responds:
Long? Hahaha, you haven't played REAL visual novels! Those are long. And yeah, you are right about Sue, but thats how I draw bunnies...

Anyway, thanks for everything!

Dark-scarecrowDark-scarecrow
February 3, 2012
my review

Hey dude, I like the story seriously but, I saw a problem in the way you present it... it's a long story, and you read it, I had nothing against read, and i like it cause it looked like a little childrens book with draw an even music, but in animations matter, you should work in more details to make the story interesting, there are other "graphical novels" here at the Grounds, as an example check for....http://www.newgrounds.com/port al/view/492411 this was a little nove like yours, but they do a litle extra stuff that maybe you should try to emphazise a little more the "visual novel" details.

see you soon.


Nittram responds:
Yes, I have a mayor visual novel called 416 which is way better. This is just a short story I had written and wanted to show it to the world.

Thanks anyway.